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like saltwater
in my lungs
like swallowing the sea
swimming to you

come home
winter breaks like ice caps
crashing down the mountains
bursting the banks of rivers
like unruly children
giddy with snowmelt

from the valley
crisp gray skies melt into
rose and violet cognac mornings
the thick creamy air
pregnant with rain
leaves petrichor in my mouth

heady with the smell of loam
i run through the meadows
picking daffodils and hyacinth
as the brittle summer heat comes ‘round
baking my skin into strawberries
is that lazy old dog
basking on the porch
in the new sun
not quite hot enough
to ease his
arthritic joints

the mornings are heavy
with the sounds of
traffic and baby birds
frost on the lawn
and a chilled breeze
lurking between the hills

all the windows
the burrows and nests
are flung wide open
March
Something I found and am fixing.

Critiques are welcome. It's a work in progress.

I think it needs more connective tissue and to be less bland.
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greenleo94
Alex
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United States
I'm an active, outdoorsy person with an incredible lazy streak. :P Also I want to be a surgeon.

Oh and, you know, just to get this out of the way: I'm gay. Simple as that. ;P
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Thank you so much for all of the comments, favs, and watches guys! Really. I wish I could thank you all individually, but this will have to do.

Much love. :heart:

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:iconbraxton-t-rutledge:
Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
^_^

Thank you.

Also... happy 4th.
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:icongreenleo94:
greenleo94 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:squee: FOR YOU
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:icongreenleo94:
greenleo94 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:

I logged on and was like "wtf? Why do I have so many messages?" XD I didn't see this coming at all.
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vespera Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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:iconbraxton-t-rutledge:
Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
You helped that old man upstairs wake with a tumeacent glow! Be proud.
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:icongreenleo94:
greenleo94 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. Well considering we mostly had sex in the afternoon, it's only from his nap. :P
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:iconbraxton-t-rutledge:
Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Oh, the best time for a elderly gent to wake with a tumescent glow.
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greenleo94 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lol. No wonder he liked sweeping my porch so much...
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