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Kayaking at 7am on Blackridge

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June 26, 2014
7am on Blackridge is refreshing, vivid poetry by greenleo94.
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raindrops crack
the glass of the lake
startling silver
and scarlet fish
gone in a blink
against the sediment
and grasping
lakeweed

the sweep
of my paddle
cleaves ripples
against the
mermaid green
waters
enticing richness
as the restless-dog
wind bites
the heels of the storm
and the sun
shoulders past

the lake
gleamed
like the sky
A simple poem about my newfound love of kayaking. It's so wonderfully peaceful.

(I really would like a little sailboat.)
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Mercury-the-Queen's avatar
You write beautifully.